My love for you is like a daisy.
I wanted it to grow pretty.
So I watered it daily.
God, I was so happy.
My daisy bloomed healthily.
Just like I wanted it to be.
Oh but wait,
"How I wish it was big."
So I watered it every minute.
My oh my.
My daisy just died.
I didn't get it.
So I asked my mom why.
"Why mommy why? Why my daisy dies?"
"I water it every minute and every time."
But what mom said made me cry.
"Because a little too much can kill sometimes."
—dafhyl
-
Author:
Dafyl (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: October 22nd, 2022 14:02
- Comment from author about the poem: this is the first poem i wrote about my first heartbreak :)
- Category: Love
- Views: 11
Offline)
Comments1
The mix of your beautiful poem and Taylor's one of best breakup songs is a perfection. And the last line hits different when you know it all too well. And i am so so sorry about what you've been through but it happens to anyone. You are not alone. Hope you feel well again very soon.
Thank you so so much. Am getting back stronger soon
Really glad :))))
To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.