Daisy

dafhyl



 

My love for you is like a daisy.

I wanted it to grow pretty.

So I watered it daily.

 

God, I was so happy.

My daisy bloomed healthily.

Just like I wanted it to be.

 

Oh but wait,

"How I wish it was big."

So I watered it every minute.

 

My oh my.

My daisy just died.

I didn't get it.

So I asked my mom why.

 

"Why mommy why? Why my daisy dies?"

"I water it every minute and every time."

But what mom said made me cry.

"Because a little too much can kill sometimes."

—dafhyl

 

 

  • Author: Dafyl (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 22nd, 2022 14:02
  • Comment from author about the poem: this is the first poem i wrote about my first heartbreak :)
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 11
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  • Melike

    The mix of your beautiful poem and Taylor's one of best breakup songs is a perfection. And the last line hits different when you know it all too well. And i am so so sorry about what you've been through but it happens to anyone. You are not alone. Hope you feel well again very soon.

    • dafhyl

      Thank you so so much. Am getting back stronger soon

      • Melike

        Really glad :))))



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