Premature Evacuation

Neville

Premature Evacuation

 

She yelled get out

I hate you

don’t ever come

near me again ..

But then

even before those

words had

begun to register

and the onset

of regret

to hit home ..

He had slipped away

and he left her

with an

intense feeling of

premature evacuation ..

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 28th, 2022 07:18
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Fay Slimm.

    How often angry words uttered leave seeds of regret - - your spirited lines veer close to female
    need to voice frustration until that is she finds her evacuation was a bit premature. - - all in the game eh
    - - - - but that's how the cookie falls in most love affairs - - imagine the making up afterwards tho'. .............x

    • Neville



      and there was me thinking the whole thing was ill conceived 🙂 x

    • orchidee

      I might have swooned if the title was - woof - Fido won't let me say it! (that's my excuse. lol).

      • Neville



        but does it go around and around in your head all day, every day ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, 🙂

      • arqios

        What you did there brings the two events into alignment one metaphorising the other without the other ever being mentioned, only alluded to, and that only partially. An amelioration of the guttered mind. Proficiat!

        • Neville



          My word, that'll do nicely sir, just as long as I was not misconceived 🙂



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