Premature Evacuation
She yelled get out
I hate you
don’t ever come
near me again ..
But then
even before those
words had
begun to register
and the onset
of regret
to hit home ..
He had slipped away
and he left her
with an
intense feeling of
premature evacuation ..
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Author:
Neville (
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Comments3
How often angry words uttered leave seeds of regret - - your spirited lines veer close to female
need to voice frustration until that is she finds her evacuation was a bit premature. - - all in the game eh
- - - - but that's how the cookie falls in most love affairs - - imagine the making up afterwards tho'. .............x
and there was me thinking the whole thing was ill conceived 🙂 x
I might have swooned if the title was - woof - Fido won't let me say it! (that's my excuse. lol).
but does it go around and around in your head all day, every day ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, 🙂
What you did there brings the two events into alignment one metaphorising the other without the other ever being mentioned, only alluded to, and that only partially. An amelioration of the guttered mind. Proficiat!
My word, that'll do nicely sir, just as long as I was not misconceived 🙂
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