Don't run away from problem's woes
They're often our best teachers
Either give them your best of shows
Or go sit in the bleachers
- Author: hzugman ( Offline)
- Published: October 30th, 2022 10:09
- Comment from author about the poem: Nothing ventured nothing gained
- Category: Reflection
- Views: 8
Comments2
problem is, dear poet
as a consequence of modernity's progression
'seating on the bleachers'
is becoming a viable option for far too many
and thus, rather than be inspired by your wise, challenging words
purposed to be engaging and inspire
I fear majority, will read them as reinforcement
for their choice to withdraw themselves
from society's battle fields
but you see
having a customised utopian-like
self-secluding civilisation
devoid of fighting mentality's
is all fine, until
fate, plants an invasion army
at our gates
and then our collective option
would be to open and submit
without even challenging our leadership's decisions;
maybe
something like being caged in our
homes for two and a half years
on the premise of a virus
that more than half the world withstood
without barely pausing
to acknowledge its impact
let alone four rounds of enforced injections...
and watching-on as the world
says nothing about its origins
or any action taken to prevent it
from happening again?!
(well that or all-out anarchy
insuring we make those dystopian
movies
a reality)
So yes
'Face it' is a great message
sadly, I fear its true message will be lost
to modernity's, trepidation seeped translations
(forgive me for my lengthy words
I lack the intellect to refine my thoughts succinctly like you do)
thanks for sharing
Hi L. B.
I appreciate the time and thought that your put into your response. (I read your comment twice.) Truly poems can be interpreted in many different ways and to be interpreted at all is a compliment.
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