I love the version of "Count Your Blessings" you chose, it compliments this very poem well. We are more fortunate than we realize, each day, in every way. And sometimes we just need to feel that we deserve it. Sweet and to the point, good write my friend!
This piece has a hypnotic beat that like its message takes charge of the mind and without thought leads it onward to the desired end. A more than human need to impress. Very nice
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Good write CB.
Thanks orchi
I love the version of "Count Your Blessings" you chose, it compliments this very poem well. We are more fortunate than we realize, each day, in every way. And sometimes we just need to feel that we deserve it. Sweet and to the point, good write my friend!
Thanks Bella. My mum used to sing this and now its a life-navigating message.
I need an elevation from the mundane occasionally. Thanks for that - neatly put, Rik.
oh lift us up from the much and mire! lol. I do too Dave. An occasional relief from our "hum drum lives," (Lina Lamont, Singing in the Rain)
wonderful flow, a beguiling read
if you will
lol
thank you, kind poet
Most welcome kind Mek and yes I am inclined to will it.
This piece has a hypnotic beat that like its message takes charge of the mind and without thought leads it onward to the desired end. A more than human need to impress. Very nice
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