You couldn't be ruder bruder

You can hate who you want mate

That includes me matey

But that is the end friend

Your time has flown cabron

I'll give you a juke drook

Put on your cap chap

Get on your pony homie

Take a trek mec

Go back to the slum chum

Take a jog dog

So just go bro

Go amigo

  • Author: sorenbarrett (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 5th, 2022 11:41
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 25
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  • orchidee

    You mean me?!
    What have I done to upset you? Why all this aggro? Do I have to go? Can I stay?! heehee.

    • sorenbarrett

      Nothing personal just had to get it off my chest. After a string of more serious poems I needed a breather. It's not the reader that I was talking to but the muse. I needed something lighter. Oh yes I found myself saying this to people on the road in front of me as well. Thanks so much for the review and comments. No please stay.

      • orchidee

        I might go in a huff - or puff of smoke! Oh, OK, I will stay! lol.

      • Doggerel Dave

        I'm off; I'm a sensitive soul and can take a hint, however subtle....

        • sorenbarrett

          Did I say Dave? I don't hate everyone just people in general. My sister gave me a shirt that says curmudgeon. Thanks for the read and don't be so sensitive, I hate political correctness.

          • Doggerel Dave

            🙂 - please amend to my entry above if it makes you feel less guilty. As for the shirt - where can I get one? I'd wear it with pride.

          • arqios

            What has occurred Soren? Hope all is well else it’s going, going, gone.

            • sorenbarrett

              Thanks for the read crypticbard this was an emotional belch that had to come out or it would give me indigestion. Not meant to offend just a release of pressure from eating too many fruits of seriousness. A balanced diet is always best.

            • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽

              Gosh i wanted to edit typos then it got deleted so i retype:
              I said Yeah taking it out and ranting in poetry is better than taking it out live on people so this was an enjoyable sarcastic snubbing and sort of venting. Thumbs up.!

              Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.

            • Bella Shepard

              I think you should have set this one to music, I can just hear myself singing it. A great way to refresh!

              • sorenbarrett

                Thank you Bella it was merely a momentary vent. I appreciate your kind words.

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