in there somewhere was goodbye

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  • Author: crypticbard (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 7th, 2022 09:22
  • Comment from author about the poem: ...this has been quite a favourite of many. Perhaps it will find a favourable response here as well.
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments3

  • orchidee

    Good write CB.
    You sneaking off early, saying goodbye before the orchilenge 50 is up?! lol.
    Well, I've not practised what I've preached - sometimes no poems written, then 1,2,3, whatever on other days.
    When is the 50 up? Somewhere half-past Autumn, whenever that is?! lol.

    • arqios

      Nope. Definitely not, there are several that have stacked up but only one post quota per 24 hours.

      • orchidee

        One site got silly. It allowed more than one post per day. Some poets posted 10 or more. People did not have time to read them all.

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      • arflory90

        This is such a good piece

        • arqios

          Thanks 🙏🏻 kindly 😊

          • arflory90

            of course 🙂

          • Bella Shepard

            This poem evokes so poignantly the feeling of loss that accompanies the final goodbye. The second to last stanza describes this quite powerfully. Such a good write my friend!

            • arqios

              Thanks Bella. This is where the film genre and poetry come together in amazing unison.



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