Some might say this is dumb
These claims about being mentally numb
Well then dump that,let it be
Instead let me tell you how I feel
There are countless nights where I want to cry
But the voice never comes out because my throat has gone dry
Tears just get lost somewhere in the eyes
My soul begins to question how many years would suffice
Life feels like an endless loop
Struggling hard everyday try to reach at the top of the group
Dreaming for a better future at night
Piling myself up with work to board a flight
A flight away from the day that I live in
In the hope that I forget how empty I have been
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Author:
Florence Red (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: November 8th, 2022 12:37
- Comment from author about the poem: Hello everyone, I am back after a hiatus with a poem I wrote nearly 5 months ago. Hope you all like it :)
- Category: Reflection
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Comments1
I love how you used the sense of looking back to show a particular time in your life. I feel like poems/songs like that always show how much a person can grow in their lifetime.
Thanks for reading it!! and yes,that's the reason I put up my poem in the "reflection"category
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