bring forth those magnetic fingers
skin-on-skin, intertwine with mine
juice up, this waning heart
with your rejuvenating sweetness
of undeniably electrifying essence
© L. B. Mek
May 2020
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L. B. Mek (
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There is a profound interlocking going on here, Mek. TFS
(indeed, interlocked fingertips
in defiance of looming chaos
when we intertwine to unshackle
than creating distance, in surrender
to unwanted solitude's demoralising malevolence)
glad you could connect with my humble scribble dear poet
thank you!
It is literally electrifying LB 😎
lol
thank you, my friend
Love the title, L.B. took me in beautifully.
Awesome!
always a privilege to have you grace
one of my humble efforts, Jerry
thank you
L.B. This speaks to a universal force, like magnetism, electricity, gravity, that binds us together. It does have a magical rejuvenating ability, on not only the spirit but the body. So well put in so few words.
yes, I believe you distil and clarify my intent very well
thank you, dear Poet
Love that clever title - - magical binding that accepts no denial - a love-knot of feelings that truly electrifies.
'a love-knot of feelings that truly electrifies.'
this is inspired, dear Fay
thank you!
“undeniably electrifying essence” the spark of a new love is a wonderful hormonal high.
Nice write.
JP
well yes, in chemistry terms
but
paint me a foolish romantic
I feel there's something, that surpasses
the input and output, gaged summarisations
when it comes to those affectionate
moments and gestures we share
with each other
each cherished one, is imbued
with potential that's far more than its whole
thus, we must search for its true worth
beyond emotion, chemistry or sensation
somewhere near DNA entrenched
inherited dreams and indelible hopes..
(maybe,
that or more likely
I be crazy
lol)
thank you for the insightful comment, kind Poet
Yes! My head just swirled with delight
Thank you
your response reads so innately raw
and hence much more entrenched
within sincerity's gaze!
thank you, kind Poet
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