Docking station

L. B. Mek

 

bring forth those magnetic fingers

skin-on-skin, intertwine with mine

juice up, this waning heart

with your rejuvenating sweetness 

of undeniably electrifying essence

 

 

© L. B. Mek 

May 2020

  • Author: L. B. Mek (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 11th, 2022 05:52
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • User favorite of this poem: Poetic Dan.

Comments7

  • crypticbard

    There is a profound interlocking going on here, Mek. TFS

    • L. B. Mek

      (indeed, interlocked fingertips
      in defiance of looming chaos
      when we intertwine to unshackle
      than creating distance, in surrender
      to unwanted solitude's demoralising malevolence)
      glad you could connect with my humble scribble dear poet
      thank you!

    • Neil Higgins

      It is literally electrifying LB 😎

      • L. B. Mek

        lol
        thank you, my friend

      • Jerry Reynolds

        Love the title, L.B. took me in beautifully.

        • L. B. Mek

          Awesome!
          always a privilege to have you grace
          one of my humble efforts, Jerry
          thank you

        • sorenbarrett

          L.B. This speaks to a universal force, like magnetism, electricity, gravity, that binds us together. It does have a magical rejuvenating ability, on not only the spirit but the body. So well put in so few words.

          • L. B. Mek

            yes, I believe you distil and clarify my intent very well
            thank you, dear Poet

          • Fay Slimm.

            Love that clever title - - magical binding that accepts no denial - a love-knot of feelings that truly electrifies.

            • L. B. Mek

              'a love-knot of feelings that truly electrifies.'
              this is inspired, dear Fay
              thank you!

            • John Prophet

              “undeniably electrifying essence” the spark of a new love is a wonderful hormonal high.
              Nice write.
              JP

              • L. B. Mek

                well yes, in chemistry terms
                but
                paint me a foolish romantic
                I feel there's something, that surpasses
                the input and output, gaged summarisations
                when it comes to those affectionate
                moments and gestures we share
                with each other
                each cherished one, is imbued
                with potential that's far more than its whole
                thus, we must search for its true worth
                beyond emotion, chemistry or sensation
                somewhere near DNA entrenched
                inherited dreams and indelible hopes..
                (maybe,
                that or more likely
                I be crazy
                lol)
                thank you for the insightful comment, kind Poet

              • Poetic Dan

                Yes! My head just swirled with delight
                Thank you

                • L. B. Mek

                  your response reads so innately raw
                  and hence much more entrenched
                  within sincerity's gaze!
                  thank you, kind Poet



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