Just Asking

Doggerel Dave

I can get through ‘Latest Poems’ quite easily these days;

A goodly number seem to be just two long lines of crap.

Plus ‘The author of the poem doesn't allow comments’;

So why are you here? You’re a ‘waste of space’; And that’s a wrap.

  • Author: Doggerel Dave (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 12th, 2022 06:01
  • Comment from author about the poem: I think I've lost the plot - but it does get tiresome after a while...... And there are exceptions...Are you one?
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 31


  • Jerry Reynolds

    Strongly felt, Dave.
    Using an awkward adverb is not recommended, like putting a hat on a horse. Forgive me for the ly.

    • Doggerel Dave

      Wot are you on about, Jerry? I know nothing of the rules of grammar. So please elucidate in more explicit terms.

      While I'm here, I might just for the record, add that I seem to be turning into a bit of a grouch - and I don't much like myself for it. I'm going to make an effort to clean up my act .......

    • orchidee

      Woof woof! How are you? And is that me barking (mad) or Fido, or both of us?!
      Dunno why I popped in. A moment of daftness! lol.
      I always go by - If ya got nothing worthwhile to say, say it anyway! lol. (or did I make that bit up?).

      • Doggerel Dave

        Probably both and each and every one, orchi.

      • Neville

        I understand and think each to their own .. but no, I'm not one of em & kinda think this was rather good really 🙂

        • Doggerel Dave

          Thanks Nev. A fit of pique, bedded on underlying irritation. I've got to find myself some comedy for a change...

        • sorenbarrett

          Have you been reading my stuff again? You can recognize them by a couple of lines of crap. Oh wait a minute I let people make comments so I can comment back. Just more crap. Liked the piece though.

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