Neil Higgins

Her eyes sat within his, as glass legs peacefully rested, as their stars and the moons kissed forever, dreaming,as their lust showered as raging sea, within tears of drizzle, now free and glowing as embers within fires spark.


  • Author: Neil Higgins (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 12th, 2022 19:41
  • Comment from author about the poem: A simple message of love,between young lovers, experiencing their first joy of passion together.
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 21


  • MaddieJ

    This was quite magical to read! Keep them coming!

  • Neil Higgins

    Grateful for that Maddie.I will try my best 😎

  • L. B. Mek

    guess they had no problem starting fires
    even devoid of wood or flint...
    thanks for sharing, delicious language
    such a vivid portrayal of budding chemistry's
    as yet unsquandered passion

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