Her eyes sat within his, as glass legs peacefully rested, as their stars and the moons kissed forever, dreaming,as their lust showered as raging sea, within tears of drizzle, now free and glowing as embers within fires spark.
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Author:
Neil Higgins (
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- Published: November 12th, 2022 19:41
- Comment from author about the poem: A simple message of love,between young lovers, experiencing their first joy of passion together.
- Category: Love
- Views: 21
Comments3
This was quite magical to read! Keep them coming!
Grateful for that Maddie.I will try my best 😎
guess they had no problem starting fires
even devoid of wood or flint...
lol
thanks for sharing, delicious language
such a vivid portrayal of budding chemistry's
as yet unsquandered passion
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