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  • Author: crypticbard (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 17th, 2022 03:41
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • sorenbarrett

    A beautiful dream like image of memories and the presence. So well worded that it hypnotizes and bears one on a journey, carried in the arms of Morpheus. The cycle of life is beautiful. I love the line "revive severed umbilical dreams"

    • arqios

      Thanks Soren. Yes, makes one think of someone's dreams depending on who was severed from whom and what.

    • orchidee

      Phew! This is something like a 9.2.9.2. format. Or if not that, it comes under 'irregular' format!
      I've tackled a 14.14.4.7.8. format before. I split the 14's into 8.6's. heehee.
      Sounds like I'm playing Bingo here! lol.

      • arqios

        Bingo! Fun with a good crowd and a slew of winnings!

      • Bella Shepard

        I feel past, present and future converge, to beguile and entreat. So well done!

        • arqios

          Thanks Bella. Glad this convergence was evident.

        • Neville


          I could of course try & be clever and pen something profound .. but shall resist and just say this is an excellent bit o poetry CB and no kiddin sir ..... Neville

          • arqios

            Perhaps after this polite acknowledgement you could give a bit of that wit in response. For a bit of fun!



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