where might you be?

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  sorenbarrett November 17th, 2022 08:33

  A beautiful dream like image of memories and the presence. So well worded that it hypnotizes and bears one on a journey, carried in the arms of Morpheus. The cycle of life is beautiful. I love the line "revive severed umbilical dreams"

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    arqiosNovember 17th, 2022 08:39

    Thanks Soren. Yes, makes one think of someone's dreams depending on who was severed from whom and what.

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  orchidee November 17th, 2022 09:04

  Phew! This is something like a 9.2.9.2. format. Or if not that, it comes under 'irregular' format!
  I've tackled a 14.14.4.7.8. format before. I split the 14's into 8.6's. heehee.
  Sounds like I'm playing Bingo here! lol.

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    arqiosNovember 17th, 2022 19:21

    Bingo! Fun with a good crowd and a slew of winnings!

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  Bella Shepard November 17th, 2022 12:43

  I feel past, present and future converge, to beguile and entreat. So well done!

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    arqiosNovember 17th, 2022 19:21

    Thanks Bella. Glad this convergence was evident.

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  Neville November 18th, 2022 04:36

  
  I could of course try & be clever and pen something profound .. but shall resist and just say this is an excellent bit o poetry CB and no kiddin sir ..... Neville

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    arqiosNovember 18th, 2022 07:05

    Perhaps after this polite acknowledgement you could give a bit of that wit in response. For a bit of fun!