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Be kind….
…. words don’t rewind
Be kind….
…. words don’t rewind
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crypticbard (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: ...closing week here and the season begins, it may bring a shift in the tone and theme of these poems... but we'll cross those bridges when we get there!
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I don't quite remember that time in Ohio, being in the UK! lol.
Do shut up Orchi, says Fido!
It was a visit on the somewhat rare occasion that it snowed there in that particular locale.
Not ever having been to Ohio I have to let my mind carry me there, which is much safer since dressed in pajamas I don't feel dressed for the occasion. It does evoke a playful and wistful feeling as well as type of nostalgia for a time long gone. Loved it.
For the most part it was safe. And this happened about seven years ago. Still quite surprising in its genial air.
I enjoyed the sheer poetry of this delightful read
works well even without context, thank you!
That is quite a generous compliment for which I am grateful dear L.B. Thanking you kindly.
I love the way music can help enhance the tone of a poem, and you sure picked a honey, the sweet strains of Chuck Mangione. I'm swaying, toes tapping as I'm reading, and loving every minute of this lovely memory shared. Thank you!
Thanks Bella! We were swaying to Chuck in the early 70s and walking those snowy roads in the early 2010s. Memories that tie up quite snuggly!
For me Ohio is not the main point of interest, here. The pajamas in the cold and the lost baggage claim...... or is it me who has lost something, Rik?
You're not lost at all Dave, you in fact, struck to the heart of it. The title supports the idea that the pajama clad folk were stuck outdoors in a snowdrift in their pajamas. What an experience!
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