It’s in how your sway
walks-in, to any room
taking my breath away
Whole sentences spoken, speechless
when our eyes meet
a glance is all we ever need, wordless
They, write about love
like it’s a battlefield, but
we’re just having fun, teasing
games, as romancing playfields
It’s in the way you speak
so tender sweet, all that you give
instinctively, willingly
always just you and me, loyalty
keeping my tone light, knowingly
my words, tap dancing subtlety
while my heart’s, sincerity
is drum-line pulsating, fervently
When it’s the right connection
it’s all about treasured interactions
that sensuality of mutual gratification
© L. B. Mek
October 2021
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We can see the 'sway' is somewhat the personification of 'chemistry' between individuals. In other kingdoms it is likened to a mating dance.
dance of life, begins
when two eyes meet, click
and plant humanity's seeds
.. literally ..
lol
(thank you! dear Poet
really appreciate your continued support
so glad you're enjoying the reads)
Lovely words .. nicely expressed
awesome!
glad you liked this one kind Poet
I love the melody of this poem
rhyme is a wonderful way to showcase
poetry and music's, synchronicity
thank you for the wonderful comment, dear Poet
there is something so very attractive .. indeed, alluring about a sway isn't there .. now captured here for all eternity .. damned near perfect if you ask me .. Neville
'sway', as a body's business card
showcasing: attitude, whimsy and a subtle glimpse
of physical prowess..
bullet point introductions, teasing
of the true goodness, that awaits
when equally beneficial partnerships can be made...
(lol
as long as I have my keyboard shovel
I'm a try and dig my way out of the holes
I make for myself...
'ahem, no really I'm all about the personality'
😌😉😎🍻)
thank you Hyung, what encouraging words
You have described it well, the small things that let us know that the match is right. I was struck by the third stanza where the rhyme came on the second to the last word in the line "like a battlefield, but" and its rhyme in the last line "games, as romancing playfields" This small break, so subtle left shadows in my mind like an echo bringing me back again and again. It was a wonderful ploy.
ohhhhh, now good Sir
you do know how to spoil your poetic kin
bless you! you've made my weekend
rarely can we expect others to invest the time
and seek the workings behind the aesthetic flow
of a blank verse scribble..
how very, kind of you dear Poet
I'll treasure this comment, thank you!
Such an enchanting write my friend. How to explain body language, chemistry, a glance that can draw two people together at first sight. You have captured this so well, a true joy to read!
so glad you enjoyed it dear Poet
and thank you, as ever
for such a supportive comment
Your poetry today immediately reminded me of the song SWAY by Dean Martin, and the lines -
I can hear the sound of violins
Long before it begins -
and the dance moves therein, so personify the creative so expressed here.
what a great observation
the great dean martin is up there with my all-time favourites
thank you! dear Poet
a great comment
Very sweet and romantic verse.
indeed, thank you kind poet
Your word choice is as exquisite as always. "fervently" and "playfields" words that I would likely overlook that you brought into this masterpiece. Thank you for sharing 🙂
oh wow, thank you!
how effusive, and so very kind
(pssst, btw cheque is in the post)
lol
This is killer.
"They, write about love
like it’s a battlefield, but
we’re just having fun, teasing
games, as romancing playfields"
Jeez can your metaphors get any better?
Like that is so true, there be writers, and I'm talking even outside of poetry, like songwriters and playwrights, who torment the sweet love tale into toxicity. But this poem felt just right.
Beautifully versified.
don't worry
I've got my fair share of 'those' scribbles as well
but yeah, your point is well made
Love's beauty and joy needs to be expressed as much
as its heartbreak side-effects.. lol
I'm really glad you enjoyed the read, dear Poet
thank you! for your generous encouragement
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