This world is broken
Ripped and torn the seams apart
Unjust killings to the mean comments
All this negativity is shattering my heart
It's called the law of attraction
We get more of what we put out
What the heck is going on
What is this all about
So quick to judge
So quick to hate
There's still positivity and love here
We can change it's not too late
Every single one of you is needed
We need to start thinking from our soul
Build people up don't tare down
it's the only way to make the world whole
Before you make a comment
Just think "what if that was me"
How would I feel, how would I react
It will change ur mind, you will see
Slowly but surely it'll change
It takes work and time to heal
That's what it is going to take
I promise that's the deal
Even the most stone cold hearts
Will return the blood, make them warm
We can survive this negative flood
Bring back the sun after the storm
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Author:
Tonya515 (
Offline) - Published: December 9th, 2022 14:02
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Comments2
I wholeheartedly agree with this! Thank you for this read.
Thank you back for the comment n feedback.
This is AWESOME Tonya,I mean it it's great ,you should share it on Facebook,your message is loud and clear,😇
Thank you for the comment and praise. I did share it on my fb a few months back when I wrote it. Along with pics of me crying about it that night. Idk if it\'s friends only but think it public on my wall.
Except right now I deactivated my fb again this week fyi
Ok good to know ,we can always talk here or you can text me
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