Squeaky wheel

hzugman

My shopping cart's wheel squeaks

So I get lots of attention

It's done so for weeks

And it causes great tension

Through all this turmoil

When will it get oil?

That question is pivotal

The answer is: never will

  • Author: hzugman (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 12th, 2022 09:41
  • Comment from author about the poem: Maybe the squeaky wheel doesn't always get the oil
  • Category: Humor
  • Views: 17
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  • orchidee

    Oh lol, good write H.

    • hzugman

      Thanx, O.

    • Doggerel Dave

      Comment for you only (not for many of the rest):
      I like your long form - Please keep it up. 🙂

      • hzugman

        Thanx D D. I'm petty much of a short term guy but I'll keep your comment in mind when I can 'stretch' a four liner.

        • Doggerel Dave

          Do the best you can, H. I am contracted to do a quatrain (or mock q.) every day and insert them into Andy Goldfinch's daily pieces - too easy.....

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