My shopping cart's wheel squeaks
So I get lots of attention
It's done so for weeks
And it causes great tension
Through all this turmoil
When will it get oil?
That question is pivotal
The answer is: never will
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Author:
hzugman (
Offline) - Published: December 12th, 2022 09:41
- Comment from author about the poem: Maybe the squeaky wheel doesn't always get the oil
- Category: Humor
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Comments2
Oh lol, good write H.
Thanx, O.
Comment for you only (not for many of the rest):
I like your long form - Please keep it up. 🙂
Thanx D D. I'm petty much of a short term guy but I'll keep your comment in mind when I can 'stretch' a four liner.
Do the best you can, H. I am contracted to do a quatrain (or mock q.) every day and insert them into Andy Goldfinch's daily pieces - too easy.....
Good advice D D
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