The Gardeness

Neville

The Gardeness

 

She has thyme well placed at her fingertips ..

Fresh from the garden and tenderly tended ..

Not architectural by design but wild and freely ..

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 14th, 2022 04:44
  • Comment from author about the poem: she had passion and patience but he wanted more ......... and so he consigned her to poetry
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 33
  • Users favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek
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  • Doggerel Dave

    Alas, Neville - alas...
    'Tis the way of gardens....or at least human relations...
    ..

    • Neville



      feral springs to mind over here sir .. just like Alice springs to mind over there, down under 🙂

    • Fay Slimm.

      Wow mi amigo - - methinks -your well penned lady sounds very close perfection -- wildly free and with passion and patience - - what lusty male could want any more that that I must ask.............x

      • Neville



        she took everything I had to give n then scarpered ............ x

        • Fay Slimm.

          Ooooh - - that must have stung and on second thoughts is worth your consigning ....x

        • Jerry Reynolds

          Well said, Neville.
          I have found being left with the poem in time you are the better for it.

          • Neville



            Cheers Jez .. & seasons best to you n yours kind sir ... Neville

          • orchidee

            Did I meet her?! lol.
            Can't I remember these lasses myself?
            It's like the annoying someone who says 'Remind me about it in a week, will ya?' Ain't they got a mind to remember it themselves? lol.

            • Neville



              some folk always opt to take the easy way out, whereas I love a good battle .. cheers 🙂

            • L. B. Mek

              (and how she plucked and mapped
              curated a path to a blossoming garden
              as life, by each others side
              but he
              was rooted to the weeds
              that sculpted him, into the very man
              she fell for...)
              hence why tragedies, always make for best sellers
              and Shakespeare reigns supreme
              for all life
              is a tragedy, waiting
              to be captured in ink, everything else
              is mere history and art...
              (Brilliant!
              dear Poet supreme
              so loved the tone)

              • Neville



                My word good sir Mek, it appears you are on something of a roll & I am a most grateful recipient .. Neville



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