waves crash on the shore with the gentle breeze
the sun is setting over the beautiful seas
I wish I could freeze time right here with you
because it was right here when i knew
I wanted you
"the sunset is beautiful" you tell me
I wish i could see the color you see
but as long as your in the picture color explodes
as long as it's you all my problems unload
but now you're leaving
and I'm grieving
now the world is losing it's color
everything's duller
If only i could have been better
if i only never met her
things would've been better
goodbye my only source of color
there can't ever be another
hello colorblindness my old friend I'm back
- Author: GabrielThePoet ( Offline)
- Published: December 14th, 2022 10:15
- Comment from author about the poem: Not my best but im just a complete wreck right now so im sorry (also im colorblind) that might help anyone understand it better
- Category: Sad
- Views: 5
Comments1
A decent first offering on MPS and quite moving as well. There must be poems from colour challenged poets but it isn't compulsory to self-identify. Which makes it even deeper still.
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