I have done great acts of sin
Towards friends and kin
I feel remorseful every night
There is no saving light
I dream for forgiveness
The end to this feeling
But pain is all I witness
This feeling of no meaning
I feel empty inside
Like a dark abyss reside
Feelings of regret and torturous rides
Roaring from side to side
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Author:
Yustaf (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: December 16th, 2022 04:05
- Category: Sad
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Comments1
Superb poetry with lovely rhymes,
But, normally all the top class poets,
Form AA, BB or AB, AB throughout,
They don't bring AB into AA poems,
But, the meaning and rhyming
In your poem are indeed excellent!
My best wishes to write more and more!
Thank you so much for your wonderful advice! I too wish you the best!
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