The Day I Came To Vist

Jeannie

The sky was clear.

Air was cold, not yet

warmed by the morning sun,

on the day I came to visit. 

I found you amongst the others.

Sat  down beside you.

I  spoke with you, telling you

about my days, but mostly cried.

 

Hoping you were listening.

That  you heard me. I begged

you to give me a sign that

you were with me. 

 

I wanted to feel comforted.

I needed it.

Instead I left in tears, 

On the day I came to visit.

 

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Comments1

  • Accidental Poet

    It may take a little time, but trust me, they do hear you, and you will feel them with you. My own birthmother led me to her obituary and grave site in 2000.

    • Jeannie

      Thank you. My mom passed away end of June 2000. It is a little crazy that both , you finding your mom and I losing mine. I've just had a rough 4 months and I just wanted to feel her with me that day.

      • Accidental Poet

        In the beginning of my poems here, I have a poem I think you'll relate to. It's called "This is Not Good-bye".



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