Your presence feel like being surrounded
by thousands of demons at once
your touch is like bullets hitting my chest
and knocking me on my ass
you cant bring me down
just so you know
no more cold days in hell
your deeds were never good
You're just satan's little helper.
and always will be
'Fear and bravery
will remain my lights
they will keep me out of the dark
every night !
so give me your best shot
youll always lose this war
because this is my fight now
and i am on top of this world
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Author:
Natalie Heisey (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: January 3rd, 2023 00:13
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Comments1
In the eighth line, it is "were"
In the 16th line, it is "lose"
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Your poem is a feast to read,
It is a wonderful free verse indeed,
You have aptly defined bravery,
Remarkable reply to someone,
Who tries to bully you in some way,
Please carry on to write like this
And augment the courage of others,
A remarkable poem with no rhyme
To prove rhyming is never a must!
Thank you very much for pointing that out to me. I corrected it. I will always continue to write. It's the only way I can express my feelings. I hope you enjoy my poems and also some of them are song lyrics. Thank you for being a fan!
You are welcome!
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