Love's Mind

Fay Slimm.

 

Love's Mind.

Love, blind to weakness,
sees what need chooses     
but time casts its image
on forgiveness unused.

Doubt born of judgement
fights contrition's due  
and pawns gentle insight
deflecting love's beauty

We, what we are, write
discord in peace-tunes
but love's mind composes
more than ego' s music.

 

 

  • Author: Fay Slimm. (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 4th, 2023 13:50
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Neville


    its not all in the mind tho' is it .. wouldn't it be just perfect, if it were everywhere .......... x

  • SureshG

    Loves mind resides in the cockles of the heart where dissent rarely inhibits,

    Your words poetically brings this to our awareness

  • Bella Shepard

    Loves mind may compose beautiful music without dissonance. That is, until the poor musician attempts to play it. Such a good write dear Fay.

  • L. B. Mek

    ' time casts its image
    on forgiveness unused.'

    'We, what we are, write
    discord in peace-tunes'
    Brilliant!
    so deep, so very wise dear Fay
    thank you and Happy New year!



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