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arqios


Notice of absence from arqios
Be kind….
…. words don’t rewind

 

 

 

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  • Author: crypticbard (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 6th, 2023 04:40
  • Comment from author about the poem: A good friend of mine was born on July 27 and so was one of my sisters; only realised that tragedy struck on that same day in the 1890s, during my great grandfather's days.
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 11
  • Users favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek
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  • sorenbarrett

    This write holds a feel of mystery and a sense of foreboding. The ending lines give me the feel that beauty gilds with gold a darker underlying issue. Very nicely done it reads smooth and is haunting

    • arqios

      Thanks Soren. It does give a sense of foreboding and haunting.

    • orchidee

      Van Gogh? A troubled soul.
      Fido says to me: 'No 'ear ear' - 'hear, hear' - jokes, please!'

      • arqios

        Yes Fido, too bad the ear was lopped off.

      • L. B. Mek

        'be tender, be kind while you may'
        a timeless, nugget
        of humane wisdom!
        brilliant! dear cherished Poet
        Happy New Year

        • arqios

          Happy New Year L.B.! Thanks kindly.

        • Bella Shepard

          Such beautiful lines in honor of a beautiful and tortured soul. I love the last stanza which seems to epitomize what van Gogh loved to paint most. So lovingly written dear friend.

          • arqios

            The sight and smell of wheat 🌾 and flax in a spray of sunlight is quite bewildering in its radiance and Vincent captured that so well.

          • Mr. Not

            beautifully worded as always

            • arqios

              Thank you. Happy New Year!



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