The thief of joy The sister of happiness Like a two face facing Foxtrotting.tippy-toe-ing the tango They dance together in equal sway Still not not enough Ying -yang , up down ,round and round. spinning top ,which end shall it be at when it stops? The emptyness not void of anything but full of that , not experienced ... What gap ,that fills Yet in the end ---empty along -side ourselves with the things that worry.... ##### as if the things that ever worry Do problems know and understand the stress it cause one to feel and deal with? Do problems issues ever pause and care to stop and think about You?? just starring back at you of what You going to do... Problems does not know you but oh too well You do.. #Rinabella2023
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Rinabella (
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- Category: Reflection
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I really like the concept of this piece you've written.
Only one word of advice, break up your sentences with spaced lines in between, it makes for easier reading.
Thanks for this is was delightful to think about. Hope you have time to read 1 or 2 of mine, all the best.
Thank for the advice.I will definetly.do so.
Much appreciated.
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