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Minki

i want to take my bags and leave this place.

something is calling for me, i know i have to go.

heavenly call, is it a friend or an enemy?

it doesn't matter, gotta take a look at it myself.

  • Author: Minki (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 8th, 2023 10:46
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • L. B. Mek

    I know these words
    and that thundering, yearning
    in those impatiently prickling veins
    that give life to such desperation
    (running, is a utility of survival
    and often
    a prerequisite precursor to new beginnings
    and so, its not always the wrong choice
    but, dear youthful soul
    be careful, of those choices made
    in the heat of rage or while drowning
    in our laments..
    for there is always one thing, we can't outrun
    and that's ourselves, always!
    so if you have the time, Prepare
    think out your plan and path
    then question yourself
    if truly being a few miles removed
    from the strife, ruining your life
    will insure, it won't just manifest again
    in a different guise or face, be sure
    you're leaping to that future
    you yearn for, and are not being pushed
    out of a now, you may yet salvage
    and grow far stronger
    for doing so...)
    either way, I laud the empowering tone
    and message in your words
    and wish you the every best of luck with either choice
    thanks for sharing, stay strong!

    • Minki

      thank you!



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