Cause and Affect
Come the day, when I am all but dust
I fear the consequences
of my searching, for a single outcome
may well have a serious
impact and subsequent repercussions
upon all those whom
I did once, simply either love or lust ..
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Author:
Neville (
Offline) - Published: January 16th, 2023 04:48
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I'll have to swoon if there's any lust! lol.
as is your want my furry fellow 🙂
what can I say Hyung
I read and just started typing away
thanks for inspiring my humble scribble
such a relatable read, wonderful tone of sincerity
reinforcing the seriousness of the subject matter
(long, has it been since I too
questioned, my zeal
for that all-purpose, perfect-fit
solution
and so, eventually
I surrendered, my need
for square edges
to my, hopes and wishes
now I fish with blank pages
upon bleak ink's, cages
seeking merely a reasoning
to shed some meaning
all else, I surrender to fate
or universe or whatever gets
to decide
I merely, tiptoe the line
between living life
with one arm outside of half open
car windows
swaying, with the motorway winds
choosing my lane
and hoping, eventually it delivers me
somewhere near, my desired
destination)
watashi ga miru no wa tetsudatsu te kure te arigatou bro 🙂
A deep and thoughtful few lines amigo - -- Searching for differences between love and lust can raise repercussions that are best left to the bravest methinks. What has been was perhaps fated maybe..................x
bless ya ............ x
Could have left that one out, Nev. I just about manage that anxiety, that although "my intentions are good" they maybe have left scars.......
some folk wear their scars like others wear their campaign medals .. I prefer to keep mine under wraps until .............................. 🙂
Yes there is a lingering thought as we age about what will happen to us.....during our lives most of us loved and lusted a lot....and how that affected them. I hope we can say the world is better off because we were here. x
Thank you kindly and so very much Christina8 .. your review note reads like a poem in its own write .. indeed, that last sentence is like .. far out and like something else entirely .. kinda like my wishes and thoughts exactly .. x
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