Those Days


I wanna cherish;

Those days of life

In which I lived

And felt alive


Not today is the day 

To hinder

To mingle in the air

Tough it is


Just see me

I promise you

My vengeance will be hard on you

You ruined  our lives


Just stay aback

I'm gonna show you

What I can

And I will do   


  • Author: VenneKing (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 16th, 2023 21:22
  • Comment from author about the poem: This is the first piece I've ever composed. It was one of my darkest days that had triggered the emotion of writing a poetry for me. For me, this piece is a notice to the person that ruined our lives and broke me apart into millions of pieces.
  • Category: Sad
  • Views: 12


  • crypticbard

    Yes! That is a strong first piece. Have my share of them and even go back to them, each being like nails that peg down the lid of a coffin of yesterday. Welcome to MPS, belatedly, and happy new year.

    • VenneKing

      Thank you!
      Happy New Year!!

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