what if i

amepiesces

what if i ..

can't cry no more..

being stuck and strucked so much it becomes aloof 

just listen to me ..

dont give a fuck hmm..

but what if i became a picture of what i all endured 

dont cry now dont cry now.

dont be someone you cant talk about..

but i am loosing myself ..loosing her damn...am loosing oh.,

just a clay,,

molded by faults..

called by names again and again until she forgots..

she speaks less..hmm

but sees all..

like a statue on display being held by the stones they throwed.

dont breathe now dont breathe out,,

dont be someone you cant talk about ..

i killed her again killed her damn..i killed..ohh

i cant cry now cant breathe now...

are you happy the way i live right now...

i have fallen to hell.. just give her back...am falling oh..

 

 

  • Author: amepiesces (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 20th, 2023 13:54
  • Comment from author about the poem: its a song i wrote on the melody of the song falling by harry styles...i was listening to it..and i was feeling like this...so yeah..
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  • sorenbarrett

    This is so raw, so loaded with emotion, it drips pain. It oozes the human condition. It strikes at the heart of what poetry is.

  • amepiesces

    thankyou for understanding the meaning and the emotion i reflected through this poem....



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