Elegance betrothed
In my penchant
I am so drawn
Towards this dawn
Like a diamond
Shines the sun
With its blazing rays
It makes us warm
With its sparkling light
It makes things shine
Even moons and planets are of that kind
Like a horse
The wind runs carefree
Runs through fields
And my skin
Fills me with pride
Makes me alive
I thank thy lord
For the lovely wind
Like a woman
A forest lies
With its roles
And duties abide
Cares for all
Listens none
Shelters birds
And shade to sun
~VenneKing
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Author:
VenneKing (
Offline) - Published: January 21st, 2023 11:44
- Category: Nature
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Hello. Are you having an issue where you click on your public profile and it say’s critical error? I am. I can see everything else but not public profile
Well, if you have published it right away then it won't show. You need to wait for few hours or so.
I too faced the same issue at the start but then when I browsed it again after a few hours I found it
And one more thing, in the search box, do not search your username but search the name of your poem it will show up
My work shows. I can can click on everything and see all fine. When I click on the one that says “my public profile” it’s a white screen and says something went critically wrong on this website. If I click on my friends profile it’s the same. The only way I can access work is by going to the community. I just can’t access my public profile since I published this morning.
I do love your poem by the way
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