My Life

Noelle See

My life is kind of a mess right now
Everything is so jumbled and crazy
My parents are trying really hard to
Get us back, but I still linger in an
Unknown household. When will I be free?
My friends are supportive of my struggles.
I want to make my own decisions.
Why do I have to be away from my 
Parents and my normal life.
I want everything to change.

  • Author: N.A Atkins (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 21st, 2023 12:35
  • Comment from author about the poem: It represents what goes around in my head everyday. My life is kinda crazy right now and this is how I explain it.
  • Category: Family
  • Views: 27
  • User favorite of this poem: Cedrick.


  • undreamed_friend

    Well written. I can feel the poem too. Don't worry one day everything will be all right.

    • Noelle See

      Thank you and I really hope so.

    • Ok Waleed

      The greatest things about humans is the ability to adapt to our environment and make the best out of what we are given. Good poem

      • Noelle See

        Thank you so much!

      • jarcher54

        It's compelling that being "free" to you is being with your family. Most kids feel free when they get away from their parents. Your perspective is touching and profound.

        • Noelle See

          Thank you so much I appreciate it. Being away from my parents for awhile made me want to be with them a lot. To me it is freedom.

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