My life is kind of a mess right now
Everything is so jumbled and crazy
My parents are trying really hard to
Get us back, but I still linger in an
Unknown household. When will I be free?
My friends are supportive of my struggles.
I want to make my own decisions.
Why do I have to be away from my
Parents and my normal life.
I want everything to change.
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Author:
N.A Atkins (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: January 21st, 2023 12:35
- Comment from author about the poem: It represents what goes around in my head everyday. My life is kinda crazy right now and this is how I explain it.
- Category: Family
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Comments3
Well written. I can feel the poem too. Don't worry one day everything will be all right.
Thank you and I really hope so.
The greatest things about humans is the ability to adapt to our environment and make the best out of what we are given. Good poem
Thank you so much!
It's compelling that being "free" to you is being with your family. Most kids feel free when they get away from their parents. Your perspective is touching and profound.
Thank you so much I appreciate it. Being away from my parents for awhile made me want to be with them a lot. To me it is freedom.
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