I was lost in the world of gray
I began to give up on what people say
I lost all my faith in humanity
I also lost the little bit of sanity
but you showed up and turned night to day
shining so bright I've never felt this way
you blind the traumas that have destroyed my life with your presence
finally i have some silence
my problems still show their nasty faces
but you still stick with me even when I'm in my worst phases
there will never be anyone was amazing as you
finally I get to truly say I love you
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GabrielThePoet (
Offline) - Published: January 26th, 2023 12:30
- Category: Love
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'you blind the traumas
that have destroyed my life
with your presence
finally i have some silence
my problems
still show their nasty faces
but you
still stick with me, *even
when I'm in* my worst phases
there will never be
anyone
as amazing as you'..
you have a wonderful natural talent for poetic realism, dear poet
let your words simply flow
poetry is unique, in that
it needs no introduction
or crescendo
or too much embellishment
we
need only let our words
resonate, by insuring
we don't waste
a single word, line..
we leave the descriptions
of clothes and weather reports
to those bestseller novelists
we scribblers and wannabe poet's
jump-in head first
at that crucial point, and swim
and swim
in Poesy's eloquent, ink...
(thank you for sharing
these intimate words
and please, forgive me
if my reimagining
of your wonderful poem
offends you in any way
I genuinely
meant no disrespect in doing so
I just wanted to share with you
how your poetry revealed itself to me)
no worries i love it when people add or remake something of mine because you have to like it in some way if someone wants to recreate something of yours to me it's an honor. I actually have one poem officially published in a collection.
Awesome!
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