If doors could talk , it would talk about those days when we fought and it stood as a barrier between us. If doors could talk it would tell me not to use it as an escape from my problems. It would tell me it’s okay to feel alone , it’s okay to cry like these four walls are closing in on you. If doors could talk it would whisper,”I’ve got you, my structure doesn’t fold.” This door wants you to open up, wants you to come out feeling bold with your head up , to walk out proudly with a smile on your face. This door no longer wants to see you cry and hurt yourself; saying if you just open me up you’ll see the truth, all the love and opportunities you let pass by. This door would tell you to not be afraid and live life like your meant to.
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Author:
ambitiousC (
Offline) - Published: January 26th, 2023 23:02
- Comment from author about the poem: In all honesty I was just crying while looking at the door and started to write how I felt. If your reading this you can get through it
- Category: Reflection
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This is very beautiful
wonderful, especially like its empowering message
thanks for sharing, dear poet
remind me of these Jessie J lyrics:
''Sitting in a big white room alone
Tilt my head back, feel the tears fall down
Close my eyes to see in the dark
I feel young, broken, so, so scared
I don't wanna be here anymore
I wanna be somewhere else
Normal and free, like I used to be
But I have to stay in this big white room
With little old me''
(
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hhXvExRQ8xs
)
Thank you for sharing this song with me , it’s amazing and the vocals are so powerful.Loved it !!
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