Flawed #2
there was no obvious bruise
or dent, nor crease
or tear ..
in fact, everything at first
seemed quite simply
perfect ..
everything, except that is,
for the two of us,
I fear ..
Flawed #2
there was no obvious bruise
or dent, nor crease
or tear ..
in fact, everything at first
seemed quite simply
perfect ..
everything, except that is,
for the two of us,
I fear ..
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Obvious appears only to those who want to see - - some food for thought in this little gem my dear Sir N.........x
Sir N say's thank you dear lady F ... x
Yep, it's about KP and me! lol.
Nutty as hell & then some ............................................. 🙂
Neville,
The grass isn’t always ‘greener on the other side’...is it!?
Much to ponder upon during this fine day.
Laura🌻
sadly, absolutely not .. if only it were ............ I am so glad you found this little scribble Laura, and I do hope you will stay around here for a while 🌻x
I love this poem, Neville! That last stanza gives much to think about....as we are imperfect even though we wish perfection to be true...wonderful!
thank you C8 .. just like American Express, that'll do nicely .. he say's in his ever so English accent 🙂
And we move on together or apart, hopeful in the revelation and the possibilities that have presented themselves!
tis truly true .................. thank you 🙂
How often do we feel a sense of disappointment when we come to find that all that glitters isn't gold, a sentiment you have captured all too well. Good write my friend!
all too often Bella ................... thanking you dear friend has become something of a conditioned reflex that I have no desire to change or rid my self of .......... 🙂
If you've made it this far with just 2 flaws, my dented hat off to you sir. I missed Flawed #1... using my imagination though...
I was fibbing .. I have far too many to list individually and not enough time .. thank you kindly tho my friend 🙂
Or, as they once said in the very old days (and I was there though much more recent than Andy and orchi's claimed experience - but long enough): ' No washing your dirty linen in public' 🙂
cheers Dave 🙂
(My head says we should lock eyes
work it out, find a path
But this labouring heart, and stifled
breath
Recognise, we won't survive
A heart to heart, devoid of restraint
So I look, everywhere
But at those eyes, knowing
my kindness will be reciprocated
for old time's sake, for what remains
of what once, was
so sincere and pure...)
Brilliant!!!
as indeed I did find these word you left here .. and now hereby, I do sincerely thank you for them ..
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