Dear poet this is so incredibly creative. Is it indeed your voice that I hear reading this poem? If so, I love hearing these wonderful words spoken from the mouth of the creator. You have captured so well our subconscious surrender to the rumblings of the world, as they become the background noise of life. This truly is such a fav!
A younger self from many years ago. I am so blessed at your review of the concept of "subconscious surrender' and the backgroundness of the world's noise. Thanks Bella!
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A fine write CB.
Thanks orchi, finely chopped for sprinkling.
Dear poet this is so incredibly creative. Is it indeed your voice that I hear reading this poem? If so, I love hearing these wonderful words spoken from the mouth of the creator. You have captured so well our subconscious surrender to the rumblings of the world, as they become the background noise of life. This truly is such a fav!
A younger self from many years ago. I am so blessed at your review of the concept of "subconscious surrender' and the backgroundness of the world's noise. Thanks Bella!
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