Making Out On a Loop

Neville


Notice of absence from Neville
If I get the thumbs up tomorrow from my Doc, I hope to be in Miami on Friday for three days before jumping ship and spending three weeks sailing around South America .. Sheesh, what we do to try n get a touch of inspiration eh' .. Take care while I'm away & please forgive any delay in my going quiet for a while .. Hope to return feeling better than I do write at this moment .. AGT's Neville 😎👍

Making Out On a Loop

 

I think perhaps my love

it would not be

such a bad idea at all ..

If we, were both to die

right here and now ..

Held safe, that is and oh’

so very tight indeed ..

Each held fast within

the other’s arms ..

I swear though my love

there would be

no great urgency for us ..

In fact, no urgency at all ..

If you, but promise

we might again, one day

repeat or live

once more, those very

moments we just shared ..

And should there

be a heaven somewhere ..

Then may I most

respectfully suggest ..

We might well, just have

found it here

on earth, and hid inside ..

This very old

but cheap, hotel of ours ..

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 29th, 2023 14:31
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Bella Shepard

    You've written brilliantly of the desire to capture the moment, the experience, irrevocably in time. Beautiful, alluring, well done dear poet!

    • Neville



      I'm so glad you can see it the way it was intended Bella .. thank you my friend ..

    • Fay Slimm.

      Oh what an incorrigible romantic you are mon ami - who would not want to make out again on the premise of more heavenly repeats with that whispered ode in their ear ? ..........x

      • Neville



        I am very norty sometimes tho' .. thanks a million Fay .. x

      • Christina8

        Love this! Living in the moment with passion and desire....Bravo!!

        • Neville



          that's me all over ........................ thank you C8 🙂

        • L. B. Mek

          'If you, but promise me'
          so tender, so subtle sweet
          thank you! dear Poet supreme
          (betting on life
          with our heart's on the line
          as our way of life
          since that very first time
          our pulse, raged
          to let us know, this is our stop
          all that's left now
          is return trips, of memento's
          being relived)

          • Neville



            Thank you kindly brother Mek & truly ..



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