Making Out On a Loop
I think perhaps my love
it would not be
such a bad idea at all ..
If we, were both to die
right here and now ..
Held safe, that is and oh’
so very tight indeed ..
Each held fast within
the other’s arms ..
I swear though my love
there would be
no great urgency for us ..
In fact, no urgency at all ..
If you, but promise
we might again, one day
repeat or live
once more, those very
moments we just shared ..
And should there
be a heaven somewhere ..
Then may I most
respectfully suggest ..
We might well, just have
found it here
on earth, and hid inside ..
This very old
but cheap, hotel of ours ..
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You've written brilliantly of the desire to capture the moment, the experience, irrevocably in time. Beautiful, alluring, well done dear poet!
I'm so glad you can see it the way it was intended Bella .. thank you my friend ..
Oh what an incorrigible romantic you are mon ami - who would not want to make out again on the premise of more heavenly repeats with that whispered ode in their ear ? ..........x
I am very norty sometimes tho' .. thanks a million Fay .. x
Love this! Living in the moment with passion and desire....Bravo!!
that's me all over ........................ thank you C8 🙂
'If you, but promise me'
so tender, so subtle sweet
thank you! dear Poet supreme
(betting on life
with our heart's on the line
as our way of life
since that very first time
our pulse, raged
to let us know, this is our stop
all that's left now
is return trips, of memento's
being relived)
Thank you kindly brother Mek & truly ..
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