Racing Ramen

PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :)



Oh Ramen Soup,
Of thee I love.
Your inventor must have,
Come from Heaven above.

I like the chicken,
Flavor to make.
Or, the noodles raw,
No need for the packet.

Such an easy lunch,
Or, snack if I need.
But, all is not paradise,
Not paradise, indeed.

For all of your flavor,
And, all of your zest.
One ingredient for me,
Just not the best.

I'm talking about,
The sodium content.
Heart racing, rapidly,
High blood pressure, hell bent.

I hate that feeling!
It is like M.S.G.
Monosodium glutamate,
In the food, of Chinese.

1,380 milligrams,
Soup, sodium, seasoning.
Equals three-fourths teaspoon,
There's just no reasoning.

As much as I love Ramen,
Hot soup and Sour, too.
My cups in the future,
Will be very few. 

  • Author: PoetVids (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 31st, 2023 18:54
  • Comment from author about the poem: I love Ramen Soup. And, I love Hot and Sour Soup. Just wish there was a way to cut down on the sodium.
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 15
Get a free collection of Classic Poetry ↓

Receive the ebook in seconds 50 poems from 50 different authors




To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.