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Author:
crypticbard (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: ... really not expecting this to be understood in its entirety, but the birthday renditions should be quite entertaining.
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you were quite write 🙂
yup. next time will be better.
Emeralds caught my eye in that it is my birthstone. The idea that it stands for wit, eloquence, and foresight was a nice way to begin this poem. It caught me off guard with September since it is usually May but then I thought wpring to fall there is green. I loved "mists of myth bloom" "a citadel in recluse" and I thought of Emerald City and the poppyfields bringing on dreams. The last two lines were genious "wordless tail of heart dried before its start" So many emotions that pass so quickly they dry before they start. Lovely
Thanks for latching on to this one and giving it a good go. Yes, September is not a birthstone match and you are right in surmising that the greenness does encompass a period of time, before the drying and trying clime. Cheers Soren.
Liking alliterations, etc.
No use me banging me head against a brick wall - out with it, says Fido, you've hardly the foggiest what this is about!' lol.
You lost me after 'emeralds'. Doh!
Soren has got a good grasp of it so that might bring you to your own vision orchi.
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