Alone In Grief

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  Fay Slimm. February 1st, 2023 13:37

  A haunt of a read and so clearly expressed --- a moving write Dove and thank you for sharing it.

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    DoveFebruary 2nd, 2023 04:23

    Thank you kindly Fay. I appreciate your the read

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  orchidee February 1st, 2023 14:27

  A sensitive write Dove.
  No dark joke from me - 'Ear, ear, Van Gogh!'

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    DoveFebruary 2nd, 2023 04:24

    Thank you Orchidee, I appreciate the read. Nice pun

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    orchideeFebruary 2nd, 2023 09:34

    There's a joke, which is not a joke - he would still be able to hear, even with cutting off one of his outer ears! Some say he wouldn't be able to hear. Doh!

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  Doggerel Dave February 1st, 2023 22:23

  '𝘓𝘪𝘬𝘦 𝘢 𝘱𝘰𝘦𝘵 𝘐 𝘸𝘳𝘰𝘵𝘦
  𝘮𝘺 𝘩𝘦𝘢𝘳𝘵𝘢𝘤𝘩𝘦 𝘥𝘰𝘸𝘯'
  Let's be honest here - should read:
  As 𝘢 𝘱𝘰𝘦𝘵 𝘐 𝘸𝘳𝘰𝘵𝘦
  𝘮𝘺 𝘩𝘦𝘢𝘳𝘵𝘢𝘤𝘩𝘦 𝘥𝘰𝘸𝘯
  Because you are one as evidenced in your smooth beautiful lines, Dove.

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    DoveFebruary 2nd, 2023 04:25

    Thanks for the tip, much appreciated. Woo hoo

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  Neville February 2nd, 2023 02:34

  You just confirmed and simultaneously helped prove that an old fella like me can do two things at once .. firstly, as I read each one of these words slow and drank them in .. I found myself thinking and correspondingly wishing that nothing untoward had befallen you .. and that your fine poem is rather the product of your increasingly well wielded pen .. 💕

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    DoveFebruary 2nd, 2023 04:29

    Aww! I'm fine , but I surely can still taste the past. Thanks for your heartfelt comment. ❤❤❤