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Currently back in school in many extra curricular activity's I will try to make time to write love you
Currently back in school in many extra curricular activity's I will try to make time to write love you
She is blinded by the light
she cant tell what's right.
Pressured by her peers
there's a ringing in her ears.
She swore she wouldn't do it again
the more she waits, she's left in pain
Their words may cut deep
but their soul she'll reap.
She's alone to hurt
but covers it up with a flirt.
Soon her aggression
turns into obsession
then depression
Her life is full of dread
as others want her dead.
It's a hard mountain to climb
but there still is time.
To re-write history
before everything becomes a mystery
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Author:
GG (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: February 1st, 2023 19:46
- Comment from author about the poem: It's about being bullied and feeling suicidal
- Category: Unclassified
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Comments2
Nice couplet of course,
Could have been given
In an acceptable format
As that would surely
Increase its beauty
To induce all to read,
Nice rhyme scheme!
I read the poem fully,
In this world, none loves,
Mercy is totally absent,
People love only ragging,
They are fascinated by it,
So, we must cautiously move,
And we can surely gain peace,
By staying calm with prayers,
We must overcome fear wisely
And recover to be ever happy,
I understand your feelings!
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