Waiting Existence

Fay Slimm.

 

 

Waiting Existence.

 

Inside the roar where water meets land,
where sound supplants all but the tumble
of pebbles on sand there exits troubles of
ongoing concerns, leaving only beginning
or ending with any distinction.


This mysterious boundary of frenzy and
clash with sting of saline drying my face
waves crash their fury against lying past
for within screaming winds lies changed
conception of waiting existence.


By the time breakers are silenced having
suffused their force onto the broad lap of
shore there appears on the brink of rising
confusion more promise of ship's return
with no more sea resistance.


Perhaps the tumultuous love we shared
before will be resumed breaking months
of lonely into bubbling excitement as fate
becomes drenched in emotional rises for
ebbs die with fervent persistence.


Spliced together at last our vows made in
deepest of feelings leaves shallows to find
relief with tighter union, binding our sight
to sound of sea we should live best a  life 
without constant heaving.

 

 

  • Author: Fay Slimm. (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 2nd, 2023 06:14
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  • Neville


    This is so very very mistress Slimm one can not fail to be enthralled by the ink she has so perfectly spilt here .. x

    • Fay Slimm.

      And you dear amigo are very very kind for ascribing such praises to my little efforts - thanking you muchly and more ...............x

    • orchidee

      Good sea-type write Fay.
      Me next poem will be on the turbulence in the duck pond, seeing I'm not near the coast. lol.

      • Fay Slimm.

        So glad you enjoyed the read my friend.

      • Bella Shepard

        A beautiful image of love depicted it the ebb and flow of ocean tides. Its tumultous side as it crashes upon the shore, only to return to the ocean once again spent, in anticipation. You wield your pen as an artist on canvas.

        • Fay Slimm.

          Oh what a humbling last line of your kind comment and much appreciated too dear Bella - -

        • L. B. Mek

          'mysterious boundary of frenzy and
          clash with sting of saline'

          'leaves shallows to find
          relief with tighter union, binding our sight'
          Brilliant!!!
          such choice wording, an immersive
          reading experience
          thank you, dear Fay
          and a true nugget of wisdom, to utilise
          in our lives..
          'flow with the waves
          taste the salt in our tears
          to realise
          this what it means to feel
          to brave
          those tides in our path...'

          • Fay Slimm.

            Your thoughtful and considered comment has just made my day dear Mek - - we have choices and being brave enough to face challenging tides of life and love sometimes is all that is needed. Your encouraging support of my take on the value of metaphoric lessons is greatly appreciated.



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