Someplace Where There Are Whales
Where do you want to go right now
she asked ..
Some place where there are either
whales or dolphins
and by about a million miles, he replied ..
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Neville (
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Save a seat
of course, you would be most welcome .. we could have a picnic maybe 🙂
Wow - Nev. What an example of a five-line lesson of exposing much in few words. An intriguing nature-tale with a clever flip in its tail - - - or so I believe.................x
it seems we believe in the same and similar things .. Fay .. believe on my friend & thank you .. x
Good write N.
KP is a beached whale - or beached trout! lol.
I'm surprised she's not skinned you alive .. still there's time I hope 🙂
My sentiments exactly....great write and I want to go on that picnic too! 🙂
You are more than welcome to cum too 🙂
Going to be overcrowded, I fear as in a few masterly lines, you've stirred the interest of the masses, Nev.... Still, put me on the priority list or the wait list... Not going to see much of her at this rate... or have you already made a reservation away from the madding crowds...?🙂
I would be lieing if I said there was more than just standing room only .. if ya quick that is 🙂
Nah I'm getting a bit past standing on unsteady horizontals ..I'll come and wave you all good bye, though.
Nice writing )) never seen a dolphin .. or been near to one .. they are lovely tho
I am due to go on another local dolphin and porpoise watch near where I live on July 9th .. they are amazing .. I hope you get to see them one day .. whales are fantastic too .. thanks for checking this old scribble out VB .. I am being spoilt today ... Neville
Yeah , watching dolphins )) nice to experience that .
Yeah maybe I will one day ..
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