Shadows Dancing

Neville

Shadows Dancing

 

in brightest mid-day sunlight

they danced ..

albeit, barely touching but …

in perfect time

and never faltered ..

no ……..……….. not even once

or for a single moment ..

until time itself

did serve, to interrupt them ..

when darkness came

to steal each of their shadows ..

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 10th, 2023 01:15
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 49
  • User favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek.
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Comments5

  • Ok Waleed

    Sounds like Platoโ€™s cave

    • Neville



      I didn't know he still had one but huge thanks anyway

    • Paro

      nice piece.

      • Neville


        Thank you kindly

      • orchidee

        A fine write N.
        Darkness came the moment I married KP. I've not seen daylight since! heehee.

        • Neville



          you need to make the entrance to your burrow bigger ๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿx

          • orchidee

            Thanks N. lol.

          • L. B. Mek

            took me back to some treasured memories, Hyung
            I'll be coming back to these words
            (nothing like being lost in a dance
            an embrace of shadows
            a communion of in-sync hip vibrations
            just sad, the music has to end
            and wake us from that sensual
            dreamscape)

            • Neville



              Thanks a million brother Mek

            • Bella Shepard

              Such a beautiful image, dancing in the brightness of day and the shadows of night. What could be more perfect than the synchrinization of movement and music, lost in time, and when the shadows are no more the sensation lingers. I call it heavenly dear poet!

              • Neville



                Many thanks Bella another muchly appreciated visit and a comment to treasure ๐Ÿ™‚



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