Shadows Dancing
in brightest mid-day sunlight
they danced ..
albeit, barely touching but …
in perfect time
and never faltered ..
no ……..……….. not even once
or for a single moment ..
until time itself
did serve, to interrupt them ..
when darkness came
to steal each of their shadows ..
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Sounds like Plato’s cave
I didn't know he still had one but huge thanks anyway
nice piece.
Thank you kindly
A fine write N.
Darkness came the moment I married KP. I've not seen daylight since! heehee.
you need to make the entrance to your burrow bigger 😎🐁x
Thanks N. lol.
took me back to some treasured memories, Hyung
I'll be coming back to these words
(nothing like being lost in a dance
an embrace of shadows
a communion of in-sync hip vibrations
just sad, the music has to end
and wake us from that sensual
dreamscape)
Thanks a million brother Mek
Such a beautiful image, dancing in the brightness of day and the shadows of night. What could be more perfect than the synchrinization of movement and music, lost in time, and when the shadows are no more the sensation lingers. I call it heavenly dear poet!
Many thanks Bella another muchly appreciated visit and a comment to treasure 🙂
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