by any chance, are you
stealing a glance
at your wife of twenty years
my love
not quite, my sweet
I’m merely partaking in my favourite
passion
this be what I refer to, as stargazing
© L. B. Mek
February 2023
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What a wonderful thought and thing to say. It reflects like the light of the stars the shining light of the energy behind it. Words of love.
(right? who said romance was dead
as long as fantasy exists
so do our sweet words and dreams)
glad you could relate dear Poet
'words of love', indeed!
This is so sweet and endearing without being mushy, good stuff here L.B.
well, it is kinda mushy
or rather, as mushy as I can get
without peas involved
lmao
(forgive me, my sense of humour
is faulty, mashed by time
like me potatoes n rhymes..
..
.....
with no gravy to save me..
..
.....)
😌
The playful nature of this poem is so endearing. It's goes to show, that the little things we say often mean the most. I just loved this and it is a fav!
('endearing'
such a marginalised word
endearing words and actions
go a long way, in my books
a big fan of subtlety's, touch..)
so glad you enjoyed the read my friend
hope you have a lovely valentines day
🌹
The playful nature of this poem is so endearing. It's goes to show, that the little things we say often mean the most. I just loved this and it is a fav!
A truly romantic way of describing a love that is still young after twenty years. A heart-tugging write.
'love that is still young'
(in defiance of the passing of time)
this is what i wanted to capture, dear Fay
thank you for distilling it so succinctly
lol Modern Love Is 4 Real. A Classic, L.B. Peace, Love, & Blessings, My Friend.
Peace and Love 2 u 2 'brotha from anotha'
thank you!
The subtlety is supreme. Beautiful sentiment!
(wow what an encouraging comment
behold, brevity in all its poetic glory)
thank you! kind Poet
so glad you enjoyed the read
tis truly lovely .. simple as that sir
simple is indeed Best, kind Sir
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