Distilled Time
Stopped clocks ..
Stilled
As time on a mountain
Quickens
But slowly so
And felt ..
Yet still as mountain air
Caught
And cupped
Then
Later savoured perhaps ..
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Author:
Neville (
Offline) - Published: February 12th, 2023 12:31
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The way your words seem to highlight the intimate moment is always so engaging ..... a taste again of your talent for short-line intrigue - - thank you for sharing it mon ami...............x
and thank you tooly for taking the time to take a little peek ............ and truly Fay .. x
I'm glad someone may savour things, cos there ain't no savouring for KP and I! lol.
Orch, don't ever think your wit goes unappreciated! You made me laugh!
I thought as a brand, they were already a salted
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To capture a moment in time is serendipitous, to be saved and treasured. If this poem had a taste, I would say it is champagne. Beautiful my friend!
I came here feeling fine and fit for work but leave feeling fantastic if not just a little bit tipsy .. thank you so much Bella 🌹
All the qualities of a distraction free moment, Nev; that moment just there...no knowledge of a beginning or end....
Just telling what I got out of it...never mind what you meant...................🙂
............................................. Uncanny sir 😎👍
'Yet still as mountain air
Caught
And cupped'
you at your subtle best, Hyung
these words are so deep
(memento's, grip
on our rear-view, mirror
perspectives, distilled)
I read and learn
Bless you sir .................. Neville
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