Love so Lovely.
Gently gentle
the insight that joined similar minds
yours and mine.
Tenderly tender
the concerns that showed duo care
for a time.
Warmly warming
the dreams that nightly lifted two souls
so nearly near.
Potently potent
the love so lovely we each discovered
during that year.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
Offline) - Published: February 17th, 2023 05:21
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Comments4
a wonderful utilisation of repetition
to outline some necessary
ingredients, in a successful
love story:
gentleness
tenderness
warmth
potent
that cocktail for a 'meant to be'
realised, in but a heartbeat
or a fluttering, blink
such a wonderful read,
thank you! dear Fay
Glad you enjoyed the read dear friend.
I loved the format of this poem and how the modification of the adjective by the adverb in a repetitive manner not only reinforced the feeling but gave a rhythm and structure to the poem Wonderfull
Delighted you found the format enjoyable - thanking you for the visit and comment.
same as Mek but summed up with a x
That will do nicely for me dear Sir - - and here is one in return...................x
Great reciprocity between the adverb and adjective and so lovely!
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