Tomorrow

Chris Duffy

 

 
 
  • Author: Chris Duffy (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 17th, 2023 07:32
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments4

  • Christina8

    I think your poem has a very uplifting message and it was very well done! Nice rhymes!

    • Chris Duffy

      Thank you so much.

    • mvvenkataraman

      A superb poem written optimistically,
      It will cure the heart of a loser magically,
      Rhyming is made nicely and technically.
      The advice is made by the poet practically!

      • Chris Duffy

        Thank you so much. An encouraging critique.

      • Doggerel Dave

        The agony of it all... right to end it that way - truth will out, Chris.
        Should be pinned to each of the 'it's all over now' poems we get here ( far to many, IMHO).

      • Chris Duffy

        Morning Dave

        Thanks for the critique and on reflection, I agree.

        Like those old songs where they made “ honeymoon and spoon” rhyme.

        It’s all a bit old hat

        Cheers fella

        ATB



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