A Brief Inconvenience

Neville

A Brief Inconvenience

 

she called it

a reality check ..

and as she

said at the time ..

it was just

another one

of those

necessary evils

of course ..

nevertheless

she chose

not to reveal

all the details

at once ..

since she

saw him only

as a brief

inconvenience ..

until that is

she decided

to tell him ..

you’re not even

a drop

in the ocean

mate ..

not worth a light ..

a complete

waste of space

and then

that was it ..

he was over

and done in a flash ..

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 23rd, 2023 02:17
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Doggerel Dave

    Really? He took the subtle hint?
    Wot a sensitive soul......
    Thanks, Nev for exposing such frankness, in all probability resulting in much trauma and numerous visits to a psychiatrist.....

    • Neville

      when they have one by the short n curlies, there is little option, is there .. oh and the Glock pointed at his temple was like underscoring the point she made and showed just how pee'd off she was .. there is of course more than one way of skinning a cat .. isn't there 🐧

      • Doggerel Dave

        Could be, Nev.... /../? /? - rushed comment before she gets you?

        • Neville



          ..

        • orchidee

          Should I meet her?! lol.

          • Neville



            she would probably enjoy skinning you alive and making you into a muff or a stole or summat .. but hey, don't that put you off 🐧

          • Christina8

            Oh that's terrible! I saw your note and sheesh!!! i bet that is a day you'll not soon forget! C

            • Neville



              outside of work, it's the only reason I jot things down nowadays 🙂

            • Laura🌻

              Dear Neville,
              Wow…this one took my breath away for multiple reasons.

              Laura 🌻

              • Neville



                I started to hyperventilate as soon as I saw your sunflower signature .. bless you dear Laura .. it is always a treat to see you here .. 🌻🌻🌻😎🌻

                • Laura🌻

                  I love reading poetry and engage in commenting…when I possibly can. I know I don’t do it often lately, but there’s a reason…as you know.🌻🌻

                  • Neville



                    .......... 🌻🌻💙x

                  • Bella Shepard

                    I guess if you're going to let him down, don't waste your ammo, get 'im with the first shot. This is an "Ouchie", and painful as it is, a really good write my friend. May your days be sunnier, you deserve much better.

                    • Neville



                      aww thanks Bella .. this was written with a friend in mind, who if the truth were more widely known, probably got what he deserved ......... Neville

                      • Doggerel Dave

                        And I thought it was you.... Safe to poem another day? ☺️



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