A Brief Inconvenience
she called it
a reality check ..
and as she
said at the time ..
it was just
another one
of those
necessary evils
of course ..
nevertheless
she chose
not to reveal
all the details
at once ..
since she
saw him only
as a brief
inconvenience ..
until that is
she decided
to tell him ..
you’re not even
a drop
in the ocean
mate ..
not worth a light ..
a complete
waste of space
and then
that was it ..
he was over
and done in a flash ..
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Really? He took the subtle hint?
Wot a sensitive soul......
Thanks, Nev for exposing such frankness, in all probability resulting in much trauma and numerous visits to a psychiatrist.....
when they have one by the short n curlies, there is little option, is there .. oh and the Glock pointed at his temple was like underscoring the point she made and showed just how pee'd off she was .. there is of course more than one way of skinning a cat .. isn't there 🐧
Could be, Nev.... /../? /? - rushed comment before she gets you?
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Should I meet her?! lol.
she would probably enjoy skinning you alive and making you into a muff or a stole or summat .. but hey, don't that put you off 🐧
Oh that's terrible! I saw your note and sheesh!!! i bet that is a day you'll not soon forget! C
outside of work, it's the only reason I jot things down nowadays 🙂
Dear Neville,
Wow…this one took my breath away for multiple reasons.
Laura 🌻
I started to hyperventilate as soon as I saw your sunflower signature .. bless you dear Laura .. it is always a treat to see you here .. 🌻🌻🌻😎🌻
I love reading poetry and engage in commenting…when I possibly can. I know I don’t do it often lately, but there’s a reason…as you know.🌻🌻
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I guess if you're going to let him down, don't waste your ammo, get 'im with the first shot. This is an "Ouchie", and painful as it is, a really good write my friend. May your days be sunnier, you deserve much better.
aww thanks Bella .. this was written with a friend in mind, who if the truth were more widely known, probably got what he deserved ......... Neville
And I thought it was you.... Safe to poem another day? ☺️
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