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A fine write CB.
Thanks oc
Dear friend you direct our attention to the state of the world in a most profound way. Your second stanza,"if a measure of wisdom still remains" begs the question do we realize what we have lost? Your last stanza a vision of what can be. Brilliant!
Thanks Bella. Here’s hoping for that redemptive gene to kick in else we be booted out of the cosmos.
life-affriming poetry to nourish our zest for life beautifully paced and worded what polished skill! sorry for my tardiness dear Poet
To hear back from the reading soul is quite an encouragement, however tardy it may have been. Thanks L.B.
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A fine write CB.
Thanks oc
Dear friend you direct our attention to the state of the world in a most profound way. Your second stanza,"if a measure of wisdom still remains" begs the question do we realize what we have lost? Your last stanza a vision of what can be. Brilliant!
Thanks Bella. Here’s hoping for that redemptive gene to kick in else we be booted out of the cosmos.
life-affriming poetry
to nourish our zest for life
beautifully paced and worded
what polished skill!
sorry for my tardiness dear Poet
To hear back from the reading soul is quite an encouragement, however tardy it may have been. Thanks L.B.
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