Let’s Not Forget Syria #2

Neville

Let’s Not Forget Syria #2

 

When it hit

it hit without warning

and it hit

big time, so big in fact

all the bloody

clocks stopped

in nearby Lebanon ..

And at the last count

they say at least

eighteen thousand

innocent

souls were lost ..

Does anyone

anywhere know or care

or dare to think

just how many dreams

that cost ..

How much love

how much history

and how much hope

was brushed aside

in just over

57.00079 seconds ..

And all that before

the aftershocks kicked in ..

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 1st, 2023 02:50
  • Comment from author about the poem: I thought I posted these words in their entirety within two full days of the the original earthquake .. having received news from a very dear friend that over eighty individuals had already lost their lives in her village alone .. I just knew that Turkey would be flooded with support and rescuers likewise galvanised into action .. my fears about Syria though, were also sadly realised .. 🖤
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  • orchidee

    A poignant write Neville.
    Meanwhile - you spent that extra second we had one year? Or was it 0.00079 of a second?
    I spent it by sailing round the world 3 million times, at more than the speed of light! lol. Otherwise I would have only got 186,000 miles in that second - the speed of light. Enough waffling, says Fido!

    • Neville



      yes indeed, and as far as I am concerned an emotionally charged subject, if ever there was

    • Doggerel Dave

      Sidelined, I'm afraid, Nev.
      All we know about Syria (or anywhere else for that matter) is via the media, and the caravan moves on....
      It is too easy to read and forget, but what? Troubling.

      • Neville


        Thank you for noticing Dave .. I drove through both the Lebanon & Syria a few years ago now and rarely have I met a people who had little more than nothing, to be more hospitable and welcoming .. Yes, side-lined or largely forgotten fits the bill I'm afraid ..

        • Doggerel Dave

          Was once that way right across that whole area. the hippie trail from London to India or on to Singapore was populated by (I'd like to say bums - but many had no political consciousness whatsoever) hipsters with little or no financial resources who relied on the culture of friendliness to strangers....

        • Christina8

          I agree in the comments before mine that if it's not in the news, it is largely forgotten. Thank you for bringing this to light and to give hopes and dreams to the faces and souls of all those who lost their lives in that horrible earthquake...C

          • Neville



            thank you Christina & truly my friend .. 💙

          • mvvenkataraman

            A meaningful poem with deep regrets,
            World must think it over deeply to help,
            The poet is absolutely right in his feelings,
            We must view all as humans and assist!

            • Neville



              thank you kindly sir

            • Bella Shepard

              When I read of the ongoing conflict in Syria, compounded by this devestating earthquake, I cannot begin to imagine the untold suffering and loss these people endure. Thank you dear friend for this compassionate and enlightening poem.

              • Neville



                thank you Bella .. ever welcome, always appreciated ..

              • MendedFences27

                It is being reported here that the death toll had climbed to over 50,000 people between the two countries. A most sad situation, and your poem demonstrates the enormous power of Nature. - Phil A

                • Neville


                  I am sure those latest reports are likely to be conservative .. I scribbled this not long after the main event .. and in the firm belief the numbers would invariably and sadly increase .. cheers

                • L. B. Mek

                  'just how many dreams
                  that cost ..'
                  Nature, has a most callous way
                  of reminding us
                  just how precious, life truly is
                  (my thoughts go out to all
                  who've suffered
                  and the many that lost their lives)
                  a worthy write, Hyung
                  thank you!

                  • Neville



                    and I .. by way of reflex do thank you my friend and more than merely, most sincerely



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