What is this?
A hole in the ground.
A pit that goes way deep down.
I imagine inside my greatest fears.
My eyes start to water as I grow near.
What is in this hell hole?
This pit made by the devil.
I am thinking of all that I am afraid of.
Living a life with no one to love.
Snakes and spiders and all types of bugs.
I feel so alone as I feel around this pit.
This pit in my mind just feels so unfit.
Unfit for any animal or creature or thing.
Its a hole deep down to the darkest parts of hell.
I see the devil staring at me from below.
His fiery eyes beckon me to come closer.
Not even god can save me now.
I trip and fall into the pit.
I thought I saw a fire below getting lit.
The devil is lighting the fire.
As I fall I come closer I never get higher.
The walls are holding razor sharp blades.
This must be some mistake.
I never felt a blade touch me at the top.
But the closer I come the quicker I drop.
I thought I would hit the ground hard.
But little did I know it was endless indeed.
And no one can help.
I’m now an old lady still falling just like before.
I lost my voice long ago.
I have one warning for all living things.
STAY AWAY FROM THE PIT
for never again will you be seen.
- Author: Jane Doe (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: March 2nd, 2023 14:37
- Comment from author about the poem: I made this in class one day at my school. My teacher thought it was nice. His dad is a professor at our local university and showed it to him and he said it was good as well. So now I bring it to all of you. With much fear, Jane Doe
- Category: Short story
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