Pink, Green, Gray, and Magenta,
the moon in the night skies.
Through Earth, Heaven, and Hell
the moon in the night skies.
To get through the madness
She is the bearer of night light.
Although there is nothing wrong
with what you want.
To watch the bright light shining from above.
The riddle is to listen to your heart.
Dump everything you want
take from it only what you need
and then
you'll see the light.
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Author:
Andino (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: March 3rd, 2023 21:49
- Comment from author about the poem: I am not very happy with the format of this. I have kept it for so long and felt brave enough to share with it you. *Image is subject to copyright. All rights reserved by Andino**
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Comments3
Sounded okay to me
Thank you!
Love the title. The poem is sweet and magical, referencing colors and the moon. I'm no expert but I see lots of potential in your writing. If by format you mean the alignment - I've had a few troubles with that on here as well. You can align it in the editing, but it doesn't seem to always "stick". Sometimes I have to edit it a couple times before it works!
Words like yours act as fuel to motivate me and do something with my writing. Thank you, fellow Poet. May your work shine as bright as the biggest star you admire at night.
It's the only real lighthouse we have..
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